Two words that worry me


1. Longueur — a tedious passage in a book or other work

2. Bathos — an effect of anticlimax created by an unintentional lapse in mood from the sublime to the trivial or ridiculous

I’ve been self-editing my manuscript before it’s off to the publisher on Jan. 15. I think the book will be a fun read for people, but it’s not the masterpiece I set out to write. So much for boundless potential! At least I’ve cashed it in for something real.


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